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Friday, August 24, 2012

Cross Country



Wow! I was so excited that I felt like I could sprint as fast as a car. The 12 year old girls lined up on the line ready to compete with each other. Mr Burt said “3, 2, 1” BANG! We all started to jog.

First we ran across the field, then we ended up on the track. On our way through the tracks there were a lot of puddles and yucky mud. I think I was near the front. I felt exhausted before I got to the bridge.   

Next I crossed the bridge and ran up the hill. It was a dangerous hill when we got up to the part where we almost finished the track. When we first started I was scared that I will slip and fall into the icky, slimy mud. After it came up to the hills I almost fell over into the river.

Then I started sprinting at the end of the race course. On the way to the finish line I felt like I was going to drop and faint. After I had finished I was begging to get water. I felt like I was going to faint but I didn’t. I ended up with mud all

4 comments:

  1. Hi Stephanie

    Well done for trying your best during the cross country. I enjoyed reading your writing, but it looks like you ran out of time to finish it off properly. Good effort.

    Mrs L

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    1. Thank you Mrs Lagitupu for helping me through my work.

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  2. Hi Stephanie,
    That is a good well done I was amazed that you had the interesting part that I like
    Well I was very happy like a dog giving the muddy foot prints.
    Stephanie keep it up and that is a great great great writing that you wrote I liked and enjoyed it??????.......

    Cuzzies you have a great heart
    Jess P

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  3. Hi Stephanie

    That is a good well done I was amazed that you had the interesting part that I like

    Stephanie keep it up and that is a great great great writing that you wrote I liked and enjoyed it....

    Chevy - Your Niece

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