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Friday, July 20, 2012

Holiday high lights

When the first holidays started I was excited to go to the movies with my friends Denim,
Andrea, Awhina, Katrina. When we all arrived we went for a walk around Sylvia park then went on the escalators to see where we are.

Before that we went to the movies to see what time it starts and what movie we should see. When we all arrived we saw the movie chart after that we all chose what movie we all wanted to watch. When we got there I thought that we should of watched the movie all together so that we wouldn’t lose each other.

While we were deciding what movie we should watch’’ Andrea decided that we should watch the movie Snow White and the huntsman. When we arrived into the movie theater we went in we had to find our seat code to sit  on it. When the movie started I was on my netbook chatting to some of my friends and asking how their holidays been.

Before that we had to wait for a hour for the movie to start. After that Andrea and Awhina and Katrina went to Pak’n Save to get some popcorn and four drinks for all of us. When I walk into the movie theater I felt excited to see the movie Snow White and the Huntsman.

Before we walked into the movie theater we all walked into the game place to see what game we wanted to play.During the movie we had to wait for a while for the movie to start  when it started i was talking while the movie was starting. When it

1 comment:

  1. Hi Stephanie,

    I liked how you used sequencing words throughout your story. Next time you could try and edit your writing.

    Mr. O'Connor

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