The last day of camp the yr 7&8's went to Swimarama to play on the hydro-slide and the diving pool including the swimming pool. When I went to the diving I felt nervous because it felt like I was gonna fall off the side of a cleft. 
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Hello Stephanie,
ReplyDeleteYou writing is a very small pieces of writing, you should read it before you post, because some parts in this doesn't make sense. But I like the part when you said, ' I felt nervous because it felt like I was gonna fall off the side of a cleft.' That is very interesting, Keep up the great work and I hope my advise will help you in your next post. I would love to read another piece of your writing.
Your's Selena
Room 22
Hey Stephanie,
ReplyDeleteYour pieces of writing reminded me when i went on the diving board but any ways i liked how you described your felling keep up the great work.
Kaloni
Room 22
Hey Stephanie
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